Do you like the start of my story? ( I am nearly 13)?

Your beginning isn't bad; since you've revealed your age, in fact, what you've written is quite good for one so young. You haven't posted enough for me to be able to know where you mean to take your story. However, your start is intriguing; if you have your plot well conceived, I would advise you to continue creating your story. uming that writing is your pion and aspiration, the process of producing an entire novel would be great practice for you. Who knows? You might have the talent to become a published author, either currently or eventually. See what you can do with the story you are imagining. Good luck!