Tell me what you think of my poem?

In my eyes you are a queen and in his you were just a flirt, why turn down the thought of me showering you with love because all he could present was dirt, you let your guard down to soon receive a shattered heart, but im not him I could see your beauty from the start, maybe breaking your heart was part of his plan, but there's no need to compare cause what you had was a boy but what you have is a man, it isn't fair that you remain at a distance to prevent being hurt due to the past, he tried to build something he couldn't make that's why it didn't last, all he did was treat you cold, so let me bring the fire to your soul, I can't offer the world cause its far beyond my grasp, but what I could promise is unconditional love something you never had, he let you down so now you know things aren't always what they seem, so let me show you why im the man of your dreams